Sentence Challenge- Day 21

*My sentence challenge is simple. I craft, design and ruthlessly (obsessively?) edit one sentence until I like it. The only rules are to write one in a given day and to like the finished product.

Day 21

Admiring how the waves curled and crashed onto the shore, she hugged her knees into her chest, wriggled her toes deeper into the sand and smiled.

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